Crap
THIS CRAP
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www.Klaymo.com
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Hey, this is actually a school assignment i did for A subject at my school i think its alright, and i wanna see what score it can get on here :) so thanks for watching, all done by me, no sound because theres none needed. Leave a review! i will respond to all!
not bad one
well, it was alright to watch, but it should've been longer and it needed some audio. you definitely have good talents, so maybe adding some audio to it would help it out.
Montycarlo responds:
Haha, thanks for your review! It didnt really need to be andy longer, since it was for an ad (school project) and im not sure audio would have made it much better, thanks anyway!
-Montycarlo
It's OK
You just need sound, and a little bit of fine-tuning your animation and you should be able to get a mark out of this one. It did bring the message forward with the exaggerated storyline and that's what I like :)
I haven't eaten lard before anyway.
Montycarlo responds:
Thanks for your review! I havent done much animating in flash latly, normally i would just make a stop-motion and itd turn out fine, but because this was a school project...I had to make a short cartoon xD
-Montycarlo
you made this for school?
i dont get it why are all these thiry second flashes not pleasing me. dissapointing. i wonder what grade you got on the assignment...
Montycarlo responds:
hahah, i havent givin them it yet xD but ill post what i got when they mark it
Thanks for your review!
-Montycarlo
alright and could be heaps better
sweet animation but no sound!!!! argh! why?
you need sound or atleast music in a clip or its gaurenteed to be shit
i'd like to see a longer version of that with sound and possibly a proper story line or summit
Montycarlo responds:
Lol! Thanks first of all, and i didnt add sound ebcause that would extend the movie clip's File size dramaticly, and i dont think ill be making this any longer, but i will be making more cartoon animations in the future, hope to see them score high xD Thansk for you review!
-Montycarlo
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2.33 / 5.00
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- Feb 25, 2007
- 2:42 AM EST