A phone conversation in the movie was accidentally cut out, it doesn't add that much but you can see it here http://www.deviantart.com /deviation/43989710/?qo=1 0&q=by%3Agopherguy&qh=sor t%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps If you want.
I'm sorry if the ending seems abrupt.
Don't listen to the...
.....................a-holes who think there's something wrong with your art style. It is fantastic and reminds me of the art of a lot of greats including Crumb, Crepax, Corben am\nd a slew of others and you know why they made great art.....because they didn't give a shit what assholes thought about their work. Great stuff 5/5
As I look back at this one, I realize there really was quite a few flaws with it. It was sloppy, but I think I still did a decent job with the end fight. Thanks for the support though. It's nice to see fans of my work.
A little more work is needed.
Okay, this is gonna sound really harsh, but don't take it the wrong way. I liked the idea here but not the story. The problem for me is that I couldn't really make out what was going on; who was this man, what was he doing here, did he knew the villain, what was the villain up to? These are a few of the questions you should answer if you ever consider remaking this. Also, the graphics need to be redone in my opinion; cool stylish black-and-white work but poorly drawn figures. Some improved voicework would help a lot as well. Still, though I'm giving this the thumbs down, I see some good potential here. With a better story, improved graphics, fixed up audio, I could see this as doing well for itself. Next time, try to define who the characters are a little better, add a complete story with a beginning, middle, and end, and see how you do. Also, don't take this the wrong way either, but paranormal movies like this are a dime-a-dozen on Newgrounds. This only means you'll have to do twice as much work to make yours stand out. Sorry and good luck!
good
i like the stroyline but te grapihics were kind of weird and ur right the ending did seem aburpted