Actually, this is my very 1st flash movie during my diploma study in computer science. Firstly, I thought this flash is gone. but finally, I managed to find it in pen-drive. d^v^b Furthermore, this is so excited to develop my first flash movie but it was also took me a month to finish it. Because I spent most of the time to draw the characters, background, and etc. Although, the movie was not 100% perfect work, if you dont like my flash movie pls do appreciate my graphic design. TQ Oops, I nearly forgot to describe this movie. This is insects killer commercial, it begins with silly characters introduction then the story start with 2 youngsters well to bed after few minutes the nasty mosquito came to attack they... After that..Pls enjoy my flash movie you will know the story TQ.
your 'talk bubbles'
you REALLY need to use proper spelling in your animations. Writing things like som1 and dinr are really lazy AND hard to read with the short time the text was visible. Also your frame rates or the tweening was a bit off, it seemed jumpy in spots and slow in others. I know it is not my system. I have 4 gigs of memory a 10Mb/s connection and a 4.2 GHz dual core.
Next time
You really, REALLY need to turn up frame rate. Not counting that (and the lack of voices) I'd give it a 7/10.
I thought it was pretty good.
So ya, I thought it was pretty good. Really work on your animation, maybe add voices (funny japanese kids' voices would be perfect for one like this one). So this was a mosquito ad? Strange. If you keep up the graphics, or maybe improve on that a bit too you will be making quality flashes.
I'm sorry
I couldn't find any good things about flash
Wow, you annoyed me after 10 seconds.
I'm sorry, I jsut find that kind of animation poor and extremely annoying. I did try to enjoy it, but failed completely, my apologies.