cool

that was not bad... i like the rhymes, it sounds cool with the effect you used.

El oh el, clever

Haha, that was really good. Very clever. My only complaint is that there wasn't more of it. :)

I enjoyed this

Good job.

This was really creative

I really liked this, I thought it was pretty well done. And despite the fact that it was done relatively quickly, I still gave it a good score. The only problem I could see was the length, but when a person tries to rhyme it makes it difficult.