A comedy short about a young untalented jedi. The art is pretty bad, as is the animation. The sound is non-existent apart from a few humourous sound effects. The joke itself is predictable but still pretty funny to watch. With a little more effort this could have been a great flash. Sadly it's below average the way it is.

the homer simpson screem was fun
but the plot and graphics are weak

Well that was stupid indeed

And pretty predictable if you ask me. Love the random pictures in the background which got me a good laugh for some reason soo.....

Meh it was just alright.

Short and quiet

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was really ok, but you had no {SOUND} and while it did not have sound or even some music, you had some {TEXT-BUBBLES} towards the end you did have some sound just a {SCREAM} that was ok but im thinking you should still have more sound/music in this it would make it much better. I also noticed the text bubles went too fast, maybe slow down the text bubles just abit. also you want to give your flash some more story to it, and another thing i noticed was that the flash LOOPS, add a stop action code to stop the looping, but other then that it was a start in the right direction, and about the scream at the end is that a {HOMER} scream lol, anyways an ok flash but does need some fixing up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have more sound/music in this it would make it much better. slow down the text bubles just abit. adding abit more of a story to it would be nice aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
A silent film could use abit cleaning up but its a start.

lol?

uh...cool