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I can't seem to ever finish a flash movie so I compiled a bunch of quick shorts I did over the past week...


Tell me what I need to improve on and such... Well.. Enjoy

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Good!

from what I´ve seen that´s not bad! All you need now is a good storyline , preferably your own idea ( meaning nothing from DBZ etc...)

Can´t wait to see what comes out!
Anyway, goodluck with your storylines then! 4/5

Xaunux responds:

Thanks for the review! :D

I honestly did not expect the score to go higher than a 1.20..

Im really shocked and happy about the score! ^_^

Good Job man...

You have got the animation and the graphic part covered.. all you need is motivation :P

Xaunux responds:

Thanks for the review :)

Still trying to think of a story of my own to make, then I will start work on an animation :)

well....

animation was nice, but realy, DBZ is dead, find a new topic :D

Xaunux responds:

Thanks for the review and I know.. DBZ is getting old.. :P

nice

Well, you got the graphics part covered man. I liked em a lot. The only thing I can really point out there is sometimes the shading on the concave areas is a little off. (i.e. faces, muscles, textures) Other than that graphics are sweet. Flows pretty smooth. Just sounds like you need some motivation to finish one lol. Finish all of 'em and make a series?

Xaunux responds:

Thanks for the review :P

*struggles to get motivation*

Not bad !

You did some good graphic stuff in this movie (for instance the lightnings :) ) ! I'm sure you can make a good movie, if you keep working on it and doesn't want to do something too difficult for the beginning.
When we saw the man doing like in DBZ, the hand wasn't really beautiful. What you did with the stickmen, at the beginning, was sympathetic but too predictable.

Do something we can't imagine. Lead us to a new world of fantasy. I'm totally sure that you have the talent for (but prepare your work before ! ;) )

Xaunux responds:

Thanks for the review ^_^

Im trying to think of a story.. It will come to me.. hopefully :P

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1,589
Votes
7
Score
4.08 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 19, 2007
3:46 PM EST