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I dream of Moons

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This is my first flash movie EVER! Vote fairly, even though it is a Clock movie ^^


It pretty much is an intro for Cow.

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Fun

Well i say it was hilarious, it was especially well made for your age. When i was 15 i only used to make stickanimations. (that speach syntetisator is so much fun)

kind of crappy

using the Apple Clock groups character signiture isn't the way to go. Draw real people or something more unique. And learn to use real voicing.

Great not the usaul

honestly i have been on newgrounds for a while now and this is by far the best clock crew creation i have seen. I would say the flash is close to perfect but you used the voices from hell that burn my ears when i hear them. honestly though good job their may still be hope for clock crew yet

kool flash

this was real funny man. im not usually a clock crew fan, but since u put the sub-titles or closed captioning, i can finally understand what they are saying!!!. lol. but i thought this was great and i would totally vote 5 on another flash like this.

mmhhmm

--INTRO--
Alright, this is your first ever submission, so in first submissions I put in more things that need to be improved on, for the record. Anyway, to the review!

>>>THE GOOD<<<
-Much of the art was splendid, well drawn and had a good use of colors. Looking at your car (as an example) you have good shades on it, and good uses of alpha, really good job, executed really well.

-cute: It was cute, your clock is a cooler looking one XD
-funny: many funny moments, the "thats enough of this" and the smashing of the car are prime examples of fairly good humor
-clock move: <3 clocks
<<<Needs improvement>>>
Once again, these are not raging on first film, but siad to help
-movement: some of the movement was sloppy, SBC jumping up and down, you need more of a better bound. For an example, when he touches the ground in his jump, make him spread a bit, for added character.
Wheels on car, would have been a nice added movement, also in the blast off when rocket was aiming off.
-speakonia: Althoug speakonia has same voices, you should adjust the speed, tone etc. depending on the mood. When SBC hurt your clocks feelings, a more whiney voice would have been a good touch.

<><>OVERALL<><>
Good movie, especially for a first, hope to see more from you, and the clock crew in gereral XD

<3

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1,795
Votes
14
Score
4.13 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 19, 2007
12:39 AM EST