Ok well

The graphics almost cut it. The sound however, did not. The humor would of been better if the sound was better, and if you would of used diffrent background music for diffrent scenes it probly would of helped you out.

After watching some of the jokes I could only help but think to my self: "You know if I actully would of been able to hear that it probly would of been funny".

The flash is ok, work on the graphics a bit, get your sound to an audible level, work on the plot line a bit and I think you could do good.