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^^Good Points^^
Surprisingly this doesn't seem like it is too bad. The storyline is decent, and the actions you have to make aren't too hard, but still cause you to think. I will definitely play and review the next game when I see it in the portal.
^^Needs Improving^^
The art could use a bit of work. People probably look at this and automatically have a bad impression on it. Add some shading and people will think better of it. Also, the next issue should be longer. Develop the storyline a bit better and this will be a much better series.