its ok
The graphics weren't bad, but it would have been much better with some sound or color, it was too simple, and it would have been better with an end too, like a button to replay...
This is a small line test for an animation I would like to do.
its ok
The graphics weren't bad, but it would have been much better with some sound or color, it was too simple, and it would have been better with an end too, like a button to replay...
Nice animation
but I don't think many people respect tests on newgrounds, post it on the forums or something first...
Only thing I could suggest is clean up the drawing a little, it adds to the style but makes it feel more like a rough sketch that could be developed into something nicer.
That was well cool!
But i agree with the last guy! this needs to be finished! If you make the movie longer and have a plot to it then i'm sure it would do well. But you do have the foudations in order to have a good movie
Make a whole thing....
You need to have a finished submission, wht you have here isn't even a trailor.
Sound, story, maybe color (but that isn't a requirement), and length. Great look (hence the style score) but finish it.
not very good.
there was no sound, no color, and WAY to short to be entertaining. Even if it was just a test it shoudn't be on newgrounds.