Sure

Umm nice but really short. Make a longer one that would be nice and i liked the artwork.

hmmm....

Although I do not wish to be swore at, such as has happened to my fellow review crew compatriots, I feel I must comment on this submission.

I felt the graphics were fairly well drawn, the animation was fair, but it could have been a smidgeon bit longer. In its current state it is like a soundbite, which seems a shame as I would have liked to have voted higher on the submission.

I really feel you have potential to become a premiere artist if you actually have a goal to aim for and work on a decently lengthed submission.

Swearing at people who have the slightest negative word to say about your work is not really the way go advance yourself in the portal.

I sincerely hope you take into consideration the positive and encouraging things people have said and look to showcase your work.

Not what I call art...

You see sir, art has meaning, feeling, and captivation. This, my artistically challenged friend, is not what I would call, well, anything. Although, the drawings were superb, for a challenged fellow, it still has nothing to do with art. Where is the meaning, the heart in it. You feel art, not just make it. Sir, maybe you should work on you entries and think about what you submit. It is submissions (not art) like this that just are there and are not worth even viewing. When submitting, think of putting some sort of new concept, and something that all will enjoy. This was probably just some short-sighted excuse of comedy that you labeled, "art."

Think about what you are doing,
and Good Day,

-Josh-

Art or not

The thing is I would have liked this more if you hadn't put up such self proclaiming comments about it. It doesn't deserve to be on the front page, however you have a very nice and creative style. Art doesn't need to be derogatory either. There was really no need for the sexual references and also this could have actually been a set of still images rather then an animation since the drawings are good but I se little effort in the actual animation side except the intro. SO in future I recommend you put a little bit more depth into the work, I mean I talk shit myself but you have to know when to be serious. All your wording tells me you haven't got as much confidence in your work as you would like people to think. I'm only trying to be constructive and your probably just come up with some angry comment, though this isn't mean't to be malicious. Good work anyway

A bit boring.

Frankly I was bored all the way through. But the drawing were quite good and quite fitting music but way too short and like I said before boring. And your dick is hard? Bald guys turn you on or what?