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SkyLine Urgency

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When a neglectful mother mislays her baby it is up to a passing stranger to burden the responsibility.

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General score:

Animation: 8/10
Story: 9/10

Animation: well, in this flash the way they walk seems smoother for some reason and the shapes seems more natural....I guess you got better from the last flash ^^

Story: well a story that shows the ignorance of persons and society, nice choice to make about this, maybe some fool that watched this as learned something

Audio: well this time the choice was better, the sound itself was of good quality

Dynamic: you still got those useful buttons but the flash keep starting alone, that kinda bad

sorbitol responds:

Woah, you actually liked the song? Amazing!
I made it myself to accompany this early effort of mine. It's quite difficult to make a tune fit a cartoon especially as I was so new to this... world.

The animation was a little but smoother and I tried a few tricks which are probably un-noticeable to the human eye.

Sorry about the "Auto-Starting" (AGAIN!)
I never thought anyone would see these cartoons apart from me so I never thought about how it should be presented to an audience.
I was literally just finding my feet.

Thank you!! :D

A babys gonna fall off that building!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was ok. Clever idea and fits in with his other flash. What would you do if a baby was about to fall to his DOOM!!!!???? There was less violence which was good and kinda funny. This is a movie for you if you like zany situations which end out ok. (:

sorbitol responds:

Thanks for another review, skyebert!
I greatly appreciate it!


Very good! You graced old Jimothy with a review so I thought id give this a piss. This made me feel gooey and delicious on the inside. YOu have a fantastic animating style. You're site is lovely also.

sorbitol responds:

Thanks for the review! Sorry it's taken me so long to reply.
Where is ol' Jimothy anyway? Come to think of it where is that guy with his mothers rib cage on his head?
Send me a PM next time you submit somthing!
Cheers for the score, also!

I love your cartoons!

Seriously! Those short little things you make are entertaining =P
I just love how your characters don't seem to care and how they just walk around like that. Also, the way you animate is very expresessive which adds even more style to the cartoon.

Graphics - 10 - Your usual graphics, which I like. Keep 'em like that! =) The backgrounds were remarkably nice too, this time.
Style - 10 - That's your strong point! The funny way of moving of the characters, their expressions, all perfect.
Sound - 9 - Again, sound FX would've been nice even though I understand it would be pretty hard to find effects that fit with the cartoon itself as well as with the music. Talking about the music, nice choice again!
Violence - 7 - You even drew blood! Hahaha, no there's no real violence but who cares about that anyway...
Interactivity - 7 - Your fine buttons were handy again. Thanks!
Humor - 9 - What can I say... it was funny... Yeah, I liked how the situation gets further and further from the goal but flips at the end, that's quite funny.

Summary: Yay! I like your cartoons and style, and you should keep making stuff!

Judgment: 5/5 and 10/10! Congrats!

sorbitol responds:

Whoa! Thank again for the great review! It really means a lot! I'm glad you liked the cartoon. I love the way you review stuff and make fair comments on all the criteria so that I can see where my strengths and weaknesses are. This kind of review is invaluable and I must thank you again! I wish there were more people like you spending time on what they write. I owe you big time, buddy!

cool one

that was a pretty interesting animation. this one had a very nice and original plot/concept to it, cool graphics and characters, nice choice of audio, decent humour... though it really wasn't all that funny... dumb humour i suppose, and your efforts were quite nice.

Credits & Info

4.43 / 5.00

Feb 9, 2007
8:19 PM EST