shows improvement

General score:

Animation: 8/10
Story: 9/10
Audio:9/10
Dynamic:9/10

Animation: well, in this flash the way they walk seems smoother for some reason and the shapes seems more natural....I guess you got better from the last flash ^^

Story: well a story that shows the ignorance of persons and society, nice choice to make about this, maybe some fool that watched this as learned something

Audio: well this time the choice was better, the sound itself was of good quality

Dynamic: you still got those useful buttons but the flash keep starting alone, that kinda bad

A babys gonna fall off that building!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was ok. Clever idea and fits in with his other flash. What would you do if a baby was about to fall to his DOOM!!!!???? There was less violence which was good and kinda funny. This is a movie for you if you like zany situations which end out ok. (:

GREAT

Very good! You graced old Jimothy with a review so I thought id give this a piss. This made me feel gooey and delicious on the inside. YOu have a fantastic animating style. You're site is lovely also.

I love your cartoons!

Seriously! Those short little things you make are entertaining =P
I just love how your characters don't seem to care and how they just walk around like that. Also, the way you animate is very expresessive which adds even more style to the cartoon.

Graphics - 10 - Your usual graphics, which I like. Keep 'em like that! =) The backgrounds were remarkably nice too, this time.
Style - 10 - That's your strong point! The funny way of moving of the characters, their expressions, all perfect.
Sound - 9 - Again, sound FX would've been nice even though I understand it would be pretty hard to find effects that fit with the cartoon itself as well as with the music. Talking about the music, nice choice again!
Violence - 7 - You even drew blood! Hahaha, no there's no real violence but who cares about that anyway...
Interactivity - 7 - Your fine buttons were handy again. Thanks!
Humor - 9 - What can I say... it was funny... Yeah, I liked how the situation gets further and further from the goal but flips at the end, that's quite funny.

Summary: Yay! I like your cartoons and style, and you should keep making stuff!

Judgment: 5/5 and 10/10! Congrats!

cool one

that was a pretty interesting animation. this one had a very nice and original plot/concept to it, cool graphics and characters, nice choice of audio, decent humour... though it really wasn't all that funny... dumb humour i suppose, and your efforts were quite nice.