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VOICE OVERS COMING SOON, until then we have music.

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My friend Mostly-Harmless-Mike told me about this and the amazingness of this did not let me down.

K

^^Good Points^^
It was rather funny just because of how ridiculous it was. The jokes were odd, like Private Parts, and the flaming guy, not to mention the giant piece of cheddar, but I liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Definitely in need of some sound. Sound effects and voice overs would make this a whole lot better.

Robotcow responds:

we have a voice over one but i think htye were done poorly.....and yea it only tooke me a few hours to make this

Voice

Needs voice overs cock bag

Robotcow responds:

done

It was ok...

But i didn't get it... the animation coulda been better but it was somewhat funny. :D Needs a storyline though, i don't want to sound like i repeating others but it really does..

Robotcow responds:

HANNIBAL LECTER

Needs work...

Well, it was an ok animation but it needs a couple of things:
1. Real Voice Acting
2. Slightly Longer Storyline
3. Better fight scene
Let me explain. The concept was sound and had some real posibility, but the story didn't explain its self well enough. If you had added real voice acting and more leading up to the massacare, it would have flowed better. Also it would have been more funny if the fight scene was longer and the cheddar did something more intresting than just shooting (spoofing the Martix or Scarface would work). Do that to make it better! If you want I'd be willing to help rebuild this animaion (send me a PM if your intrested).

Stay Funky,

Mostly Harmless Mike

Robotcow responds:

the voice acting is probably getting done TONIGHT so yea thats covered, and ive been thinking about adding an extra scene, i dont want to revamp this flash just yet, but in a few months sure, maybe. and yes, i will stay funky.

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