.................WOW
I like the No mercy kiillin but it would be better if you spend more than 20min on it very wicked & demented it would be kool if you added a CHAINSAW + lotz of blood + more blood
Author Comments
UPDATE: Added pre-loader and stopped the music in the Credits part of the flash, which stopped the sound overlapping.
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'Minefield'
I haven't submitted a Flash to Newgrounds in a while, and I figured thatt it was about time I did, so I did! Keep in mind that THIS IS A PREQUEL, NOT A FULL MOVIE.
The Music is:
[Numerous SFX Tracks]
Title Screen- Twisted Metal: Black
Rage- 28 Days Later Soundtrack
NOTE: TM:B is short-form for Twisted Metal: Black, and ST is short-form for Soundtrack.
Also, sorry about the rather large filesize! :)
So, I hope you Enjoy, and Vote 5! :)
Frenzy responds:
Thanks for the 10!
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u... u need help. i didnt even watch it all the way thru. seriously. u need desperate help. and dont just tell me that minefield 2 mite be better, or tht uve submitted about 45 submissions, cos theyre all really helpless.
i recommend watching a lot of decent tutorials. i beg u. Twas quite punishin to the eyes. Im not tryin to be a dick n make u hate me. do it for ur own good. and if u want to #be really good at things like this, get the full version of flash. theres ways other than buying it.
Frenzy responds:
lol
well, this was a Flash I made in like 20 minutes
It lacked.
Sorry, but this lacked alot of effort. This appears to be something whipped together in about 30 minutes... so I'll offer you a little advice.
Take your time... spend hours, even days fine tuning the simplist of scenes. Drop the sticks and move onto full body characters, put your OWN voice into the animation and actually FINISH the animation before you submit it.
You also need a plot, a GOOD plot... not the generic, kill everyone sort of thing. You can have great visuals and amazing animation, but without a plot it's not going to be exciting.
Frenzy responds:
Well, I can't save projects with my version (Im to cheap to pay for the full version, I just have the demo). Thanks for the review.
Was this Cobbled Together At Last Minute?
After Watching This, I Found Myself Thinking How Anyone Could Submit Something So Bad? This Flash Is So bad, And It's Done In A Way That Seems To Apologize For It's Own Existence;If Only I Could Bring My Self To Care. I Don't Mean to Be A Asshole-I Mean That. you Could've Done Better. I'll Be looking Forward To Improvement From You In The Future.
Frenzy responds:
Did you watch the second Minefield? It's much better than this one. Thanks for the review.
Ahh
You see I already reviewed the older one so this won't be a real review but I'll mention the most imprtant points again.
The graphics were crappy. Stickmen are usually rubbish unless drawn with some style instead of generic anorexics like in this one. The story was quite unclear and I didn't know what was going on. Read my full review on the improved version too.
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Frenzy responds:
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