Can You at least put a "The End"!
I was looking at that writing about the dog and the hand for like 20 minutes until i knew it was over. A"The End" would be nice.
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Idea just came into my mind, it progressively got more filthy as I went. Hope that you enjoy!
sumdawgtwigg responds:
Sorry about that, didn't mean to take up part of your life staring at the same screen lol.
Horribly Good :D
It was a great way to tell the events of a zombies life, but it lacked in animation; but it made up for it in humor. I don't know why, but seeing a snowman just makes me laugh. You also need to put more detail into your building structures i.e shading, but all was good apart from that.
4/5
Penboy
sumdawgtwigg responds:
I'm glad that you enjoyed, and I'm actually spicing up the art as we type.
Kinda funny but lacks sounds and exceeds music
i should have been horrible been a zombie
sumdawgtwigg responds:
I'm not sure what you just said, but I like the first part! :)
good very good
very good try i would like to see more of your work so plz kept it up ok
sumdawgtwigg responds:
I certainly will, and thanks for the encouragement.
Good try?
The opening suggested a better peice of work, I expected more.
Still I suppose its worth something.
Keep the flashes comming in though, maybe think about your ideas more.
sumdawgtwigg responds:
Thanks.
