I made this Flash for a school project. Got a pretty good mark for it as well (8/10 if I'm not mistaken).
Anyway this flash is about Guybrush Threepwood from the Monkey Island series hosting a science show on TV but something goes horribly wrong.
Update: Fixed the frame size so you can read everything now.
Hit and miss
What worked... your choice in music, the look in sprites, and the mellow attitude in narration.
What didn't... frame's WAY too small, and I didn't get to read all the dialogue.
Needs a rework, but it wasn't that bad at all. Make that sucker bigger next time, and keep at it. :-)
Hollow-Ichigo-777's PASS or GO HOME
Okay a good thing that should stay is ur sprites, they look alright. The NUMBER 1 problem that will decide my final judgement is the fact that THE WINDOW IS TOO SMALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! All of the text can't be read. Practice more and u'll just barely get it past the under judgement line. Final Judgement: GO HOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!