Needs sound
I think it would be 100 times better if it had some sound. Maybe some background music and someone talking about the action figure.
Author Comments
here is something very old from 2004, before i knew you could submit to newgrounds. there is no sound, and i will not be adding any, because this to me is like a page in a history book. thanks.
smirkstudios responds:
Thanks, dude! Now my cartoons come equipped with sound, and it's thanks to reviews just like this one! Gotta start somewhere, right? Thanks again!
Seriously...
If your going to make a commercial, sound is your first priority. A little humor would have been nice also. Your animation style seems very cheap (OMG! Shape Tween!). Put some more effort into it next time.
smirkstudios responds:
While I disagree with the cheapness, I would still slap a "ROOKIE!" sticker on this one as well. Thanks for the review, you've helped me make newer better stuff! sorry for the late response!
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