The animation was quite good, I enjoyed that part of it.
The information part I couldn't really enjoy because I could barely understand what the narrator was saying. Not that the voice acting was bad (I actually couldn't tell), it was the sound quality. I tried turning up my volume but I still couldn't understand the narrator. Part of the problem may have been the accent but I'm fairly certain that it was the method by which it was recorded that is the main problem. Also the narrator was too quiet as compared to the opening music (which was pretty good by the way).
It looked great, I'd love to watch it again if only it had subtitles or something.
Good luck on your competition and on your next animation :)