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Keven Durst (Part 1 of 2)

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Keven Durst is a radio show host that seem to get some stang people to interview. This is a new cartoon that may become a series. This is our frist atemped at animating so let us know what you think.
Also this is part one of two show watch both befor commenting please..

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cool one

that was an interesting animation. i've never heard of that guy before... let alone the radio station.... so i was left in the dark a little bit there. it was quite interesting though, cool drawings, good entertainment and nice audio and voices... is that his real voice or an actor?

Raden101 responds:

Well I find it cool that you think its a real radio show... cuz its not.. this was a recording some friend and i did like in 2005 or sooner i htink.. keven's vioce is his real vioce.. but mr. Willcocks was kind of a rip of the old guy down the street on Famly guy. that why he "needed some water" but thanks for your review

Summary.

First the drawings weren't all that great, not too bad but nothing to brag about.

The animation was almost non-existant, the only things that really moved were the lips of your characters and it wasn't even very good...

The diologue was, in a word, dry. It was just uncomfortable to sit there and listen to it. It wasn't even very funny, there wasn't even much of a punch line at the end.

Basically this was just some diologue with drawings, it needs to be much more than that.

To start making this into something good you need to animate you characters at the very least. Don't drag out a conversation to 2 minutes that only needs to be one.

You have a good concept here but that's the only light at the end of the tunnel for your submission. Good luck with future projects though :)

Raden101 responds:

One thing i thik i should of said in the desciption was the audio was unscipted.. the voice actor were given a subject "a black morror" and we started recording..

As fare as the animation gose... this is the first one we have ever done. and we learn alot of stuff to know for next time. the main one being keeping the file size down.. this happend because there were gif animations in the flash... (i know that dumb) and i will not happen anymore..
the 2 part were going to be joind together by a funny ass comershal.. but we had to take it out and spit up the secens to get it on new grounds.

also when we slit it up the secon half got messed up pretty bad as you can see..

thanks for your review..

Not bad

Pretty good, just need to work on a few kinks and it'll get better.

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Jan 23, 2007
3:18 PM EST