very bad

this was very very bad you made the music so that peoples ears can bleed and this game is not labtop compatible

Seriously...

I started playing... It looked playable for a couple of seconds...
Then i double heared the BGM. Then again, again, again and again!!!
I mean, hearing a bad BGM that many times over eachother hurts!
So i ended up walking 3 maps and quited...

You have some good potential.

Learn a bit more actionscripting and about flash and you could make some good games. Fixing some of the glitches would have been nice too, and this is more of a beta, like the last guy said. Maybe you should put it on NG mag.

mate u got 2 realice a few things

i know i never made a flash but i know this much

1. most good flashs take mouths to make not 15 days sorry
2. this was more of beata style and this belong on ng mag first
3. your game has alot of bugs other then that good job