This one shows that you are making a difference and it shows well in your work so nice job and proves to be a nifty piece, this reviewer is impressed aswell as a new found fan. There are some things you can Refine but Quite Frankly this is a unique and Absolutely fun experience. There is some really nice work here lots to see some really great detail and graphics, and was fast paced detail, so nice work there. So I will close out this one now but before I do, This submission yields lots of fun I do hope you keep this kind of flash up, because its pretty nifty if you ask me, This has some good design principles so keep up the nifty work its obvious that your endeavors here are paying off.
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Ok So to start off this interesting flash entry, it was actually ok and had some good interesting stuff going on I thought it was fine as is and does not need any changes.