cool one

that was cool... nice for a first animation. the graphics in this one were nice, good character and your efforts were quite nice.

OMG! PROMOTES WEBSITES! ILLEGAL! (jk)

Well, for a first submission, I'd say that's over average... or at least better than mine. I'm pretty sure though, you should rethink your comparison to other authors, for your wrong.

Criticisms:
Really short.
Smoke or fog or what-sit stayed a little long.
That's pretty much all.

Good for your first flash...

It was a pretty large file size because of the song, you could have cut some of the song out and used greater compression on the sound etc to make the file size smaller. There was also no preloader which may annoy some users on a slow connection.

BUT. It was a pretty decent flash, nice style and animation. The spray clouds didn't work in some places, and looked a bit odd (like when the camera was moving towards the final sprayed piece) but it was a good idea and the overall flash was well executed.

You're a pretty decent animator already, and I'd be interested to see a full length movie or cartoon.

Keep up the good work!

very polite

I has got to be the most polite advertizement I ever seen!
You should change the music - sounds like hicking - like stop-start-stop-st... you know!