I shall rate this fairly
By fairly, I mean 5 Points.
Author Comments
right, first thing's first, this is my first animation. if you dont like skate movies, dont watch this. if you don't like stick movies, dont watch this. be fair in the comparison that most people begin with a dressup game or whatnot. i spent quite a while on this, and have only had flash for short amount of time so yeah. enjoy =]
It was alright
thats a pretty good flash if you only had it for a little bit. I suggest making it when he moves make it less choppier. Overall it was alright. 7/10 and 3/5
Could of been better
It may be because I've seen alot of skate movies on this site, but this wasnt up to par. The animation was blocky at times, the frame by frame was unrealistic and it was far to short to change my decision on what I had seen prior.
Im aware that this was your first animation, and yes this is much better than most peoples first's, but you could of put MORE effort into it, especially if your going to post it onto this site.
freeky-possum responds:
i agree with what your saying. it could have been alot better, but atm im just experimenting. i posted it on this site to see the feedback i get for it, and to get hints and stuff. thanks for the review
fp
pretty good first flash
Cant wait to see how your work will evolve. Right now it looks good!
Pretty good face, plant to. Maybe next time you can just have bails or something.
freeky-possum responds:
yeah, im workin on another one now. theres gonna be a menu and stuff with an option of bails. thanks for the review
fp.
okay
well, the audio was good... but i think that more could've been dont to this one. sticks i think were not needed for this one, could've been longer and some more skating as well.... just some suggestions for next time.
freeky-possum responds:
thanks alot. i mean, yeah coz it was my first, i was just experimenting. i really dont think i could do much other than sticks atm.
thanks for the review
fp
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3.31 / 5.00
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