Just good enough to sneak through the portal
It wasn't bad but at the same time it wasn't exactly good. The graphics were okay but the comedy could do with improvement.
Author Comments
I'm taking a survey, so please give me some feedback. I want to know if I should stick with the style from episode 2 or 3. 2 was somehow easier, but I like 3 a lot better. PM me or leave a review for your input.
Well, it's been 2 months since I submitted Episode 2 and I figured it was time for another. This one was fun to make, besides the lip-syncing (which is never fun). The animation's a little different, but it's not a drastic change, so it still fits my style.
Enjoy!
spare-jello responds:
Thanks. I think I'll work a little harder at the next script.
Good animation nice flow, decent voices.
However, i did find the humor to be a little bland? I didnt laugh or anything during this movie, however the good animation did keep me watching. My suggestion is either work on your writing, or focus on animation and animate other peoples scripts.
-overall good job.
spare-jello responds:
Thanks. The only reason the humor was... uh... bland, was because I didn't have Spare Orange to help write it at the time.
So, I have a joke planned for the next one. It's all good ^_^
NICE!
Well, first off, the animation was better in #3.....it just seems better, simple and plain. And ya, as for this flash, I was actually surprised, it was pretty good! the voice acting wasn't so bad, you had an Emo joke, and you seemed to nail the Bill Cosby bit down perfectly! Good job, and keep up!
spare-jello responds:
Thanks, and I'll probably keep 3's style. I like it better, too.
commentary
The idea of commentary on flash pleases me. I think it would be cool if some other people did that too.
spare-jello responds:
Thanks! I've always thought that a commentary made it more professional-like, sort of like in Toof.
was the blond one a girl or a guy
I don't understand
spare-jello responds:
Sorry, it's a guy. My voice really isn't that deep, so it sorta sounds like a girl.