lol...XD
i haven't made a flash in awhile and I was bored so I made this quick nonsense...this is like my 3rd flash ever and well you'll see how I'm progressing...it's completely random so enjoy...please review it and help me with suggestions...and I know I need depth and a story so...yeah..enjoy! also my microphone is has low quality and the gibberish is my just frustrated after trying over and over to do a voice...even if they all sound the same cause it was all ME!
It's aiight.
Nice, but yeah, it's a rushjob like you said, and the mic quality does suck. But, it has jokes. The ending is weak, tho.
Gave you a 5, though. Cuz, you know, I'm your friend. And my next flash will OWN!! Mwahahahahahaaha!!!!! ^_^
-Ray N.
O..K..
I didnt quite get the story, the graphics were kinda good, didnt like ur music, not enough violence, good on ur humor.
THERE WAS MUSIC???
I DON'T remember puttin' no music in there...unless that's what you meant...but yeah...thanks for watchin' and your words of encouragement!
Not bad... please work on it.
+ good art
+OK animation
sort of story
sort of funny
-didn't really understand it- talk to your friends, get someone to help you make it what you mean it to be.
-glitch at the end- it just stops, then if you press play you get some meaningless, silnet mouth movements
Art good tho, please work on this
LOL...
thanks for the help...i seriously need to work on my attention span because i get so focused on makin one..then i just get lazy...really lazy...but I'M gonna try my very hardest to make a full...fully detailed, flash with all the works...AND I VOW TO MAKE FRONT PAGE AND TOP....100...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAA. ..THANK you for your review though..you helped lots
What?
What just happened? I have no idea what that was about! Your graphics were by far the best thing about your animations. As for the voice, try moving your mouth a little back from the mike and just increasing the volume after recording. I could at least tell you tried to have a story, but only you know what the story was. It also went very fast, which made it even harder to understand. Also, try to back up a little; your shots were all very close, which was a little confusing because the movie felt very serious but I think it was supposed to be funny.
You would have passed if I could understand a single thing that went on.
LOL...thanks...
oh..and i'm using the mic from the socom game...because...it was free!
but yeah...I WAS REALLY BORED WHEN I MADE THIS AND THEN I STARTED TO GET LAZY...the caps don't mean nothing by the way but yeah...thanks for the advice!
Okey, well...
I don't know what the fuck just happened... but, whatever! XD I found it funny, for some reason (and that is also why I gave it a 6 on humor).. the animation were good, but it would've been good if it were longer.. and if you understood what the fuck was going on. Other than that.. well, it was good. :P
haha...i tried to make it funny...but...the joke...needed a little bit more....sense....but yeah...thanks for the tip...i'm gonna try for a better one! look for me on the fron page!