that suck really bad and good luck next time
Great concept, bur PLEASE fix the voiceover - it is dull and ruins the joke. Oh yeah - capture not captivate
Keep making these flash!
The voiceover was really that bad? Hm, maybe I should have just stuck with human voice actors. Still, thanks for reviewing my first attempt. :D I found your review useful, and I'll take it into account.
'Capture'. Thought it sounded strange. :P
This had real potential
But I agree with the last guy, the computer voice just wasn't approriate for this. If you did the voice over with someone who could do like the cheesy Oxiclean salesman voice it would probably be a lot better, but I do like your drawing style.
Nice idea and pictures (did you draw them?). Good point but lose the computer voice, realy it makes it much worse than it could have been
"creully captivate small creatures?
CAPTURE! You wanted to say CAPTURE.
oh well. you lost me with the computer voice and lack of animation in general.
More animation, more voice acting. Got it.
Oh yeah, and better grammar. XD