nah

wasnt totally that good add sound and that would of made a difference

It was alright.

__The Good__
The graphics were pretty good, nice use of colors and the characters were nicely drawn. The style was interesting as well. I enjoyed watching this flash.

__The Bad__
No audio. This would have been so much better if this had music and sound effects. It's really hard to enjoy a flash without any sound. That's why I didn't enjoy this as much as I could have. Pretty short also.

__Over All__
A short flash with good graphics. Nice job on this flash, keep up the good work!

not bad one

that was an alright animation. it should've been longer and had audio in it, but your efforts were nice and it was quite good for a first animation too. the idea to this one was quite cool as well. you do have some potential... i'd suggest browsing a couple tutorials to help maximize it.

If you want a better flash

Add some sound and music. People should stop submitting rushed half assed animations.

Some sounds would be good

But right now it is a pretty good Flash just need some scary music and panting, and bravo a completed Flash.