00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme

gabmaster5 just joined the crew!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

A Love Song

Share Collapse

Author Comments

A Beautiful Love Song..... with a twist.

I am working on a new animation in the style of my old one, Horsforth, only I have decided to lip synch the new one, so the mouths look more realistic. So this was a small test of my lip synching ability. The song is by comedian Stephen Lynch.

Log in / sign up to vote & review!

Uhhh

Yeah not the worst I have seen. Low level audio has been stated and you have stated you are going to work on it as well. I love Stephen Lynch and that is how I found your video.

On the topic of the fret hand though, when I play guitar my hand is underneath the neck with my thumb in back. Maybe make the top of the hand not go up quite so high and put a half circle on the neck to simulate fingers going accross the frets? Just my .02 so obviously not worth a shit but I figured I would say it anyways :).

wow!

funny but wrong.

MikeStand responds:

Well, she had to be told some way...

Ok I guess

Graphics : Prety good, but you still have room for improvement (like why the left hand of the guy is behind the guitar???)

Sound : I didn't heard a thing before I crank up the volume ... Fixing that would be a good idea ^^

Not too shabby.

The graphics were a bit choppy but pleasant. My advice would be to use the line tool to create celery-sharp edges for the characters as of the blunt and blundering of brush-tool.

The style was sorta nifty. I'd up the framerate as the tweens were somewhat jittery. Please add limbs next time. Also, no one plays the guitar with their hand behind it. That was lazy: you should have draw a hand!

Sound: Nice song.

Violence, Interactivity, Humour: etc.

Overall: The lip-sync was fine. I understand that this was a lip-sync project, but you should have really put more effort into other aspects of the cartoon. One example would be the hands. I'm sure you'll pull of something much more substantial and interesting next time.

Well done: 2/5.

MikeStand responds:

"Also, no one plays the guitar with their hand behind it"
What!? Everyone plays guitar with their hand behind the fret board, that's how you hold it!

Thanks for the advice though. The hands are intentionally as they are, mainly becuase, yes, it is alot easier, but also because that's the style I use.

Nice

A very good flash movie.

MikeStand responds:

A very good flash movie review.

Credits & Info

Views
3,874
Faves:
1
Votes
8
Score
3.77 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 29, 2006
8:35 AM EST