Pretty Good
Well the cool thing about this is that i am Jimtopia's younger brother and i can't believe a person acctually made a fan movie, very pretty coll
Author Comments
LOW QUALITY RECOMMENDED!
*UPDATE*
Thank you all who watched my animation it finally earned a spot in the 2006 Christmas collection and also thank all NG staff members thanks =D
Well here it is guys a flash I have been working since December 25, 2006 I of course I did not work on it every day I took some breaks... I am not shooting for the NG rewards however I am hoping it earns a spot in the 2006 Christmas Collection =D I would be more than happy.
Special Thanks to Jimtopia =D
Special Thanks to All the Newgrounds tutorials =D And
everyone that watches it =D
Heil
It looks like one of hitlers movies.. But I'm not quite sure!
Graphic's not better, and could still be alot better!
So next time you should improve the graphics, and then you might get a nice score as well...
Mess with best regards,
thongsala, Denmark...
Ouch
(- The Good -)
Decent graphics, you actually tried hard with the opening and it showed. Song was OK, good quality sound and so on.
It was also your first flash, and you did quite well for a first :)
(- The Bad -)
Took ages to long and was painful to watch because it was so slow. You should try to keep the size as low as possible. My crappy computer couldn't really handle it. Flashes based on flash documents are getting really boring, you should try to create your own character. Also the snow was dodgy.
(-- Overall --)
A good effort for your first flash, it needs improvement and for gods skae lower the filesize, some people DO have bottom of the ladder, crap computers. ;)
(-- Review Request Club--)
Dash-02 responds:
(- The Good -)
Well I do have to agree that after about 1 and half month's I did dramatically improve on my flash skills. Thanks
(- The Bad -)
If it was too short would you also out it instead of the too long part.
And yes, Flash files are getting old now.
(-- Overall --)
Yes I will try to lower those filter's it's just that I wanted for viewers to kind of like have a good impression of me and that I can make filter's do magic thing's. Also I tried to put more filter's and shit so you could wait a bit
Thanks for your review and wish you luck, I'm going to sleep!
cool one
that was a nice christmas animation. nothing too special overall, but it was still good to watch.... though im getting a little tired of all the holidays animations. i still think your efforts were nice, good music and graphics and it was cool to check out.
Dash-02 responds:
Why Thank You very much for your review!
I abously had to put a lot of effort into it since my other flash animations did not make so these time I took about 30-45 day's on learning techniques and that's how it became what it is now.
Decent
-GOOD-
The graphics were okay in this movie, Although it realy looks like you rushed the graphics. Your objects were very 2-D and could have been more realistic. Another thing was that I didn't like how you took images and pasted them into your flash. It looked bad and didn't blend with the rest of your movie. The sound was done quite nicly in this flash but I didn't like the sharp stops and silent intervals between songs.
-BAD-
Well the animation wasn't my favorite part of this flash. One thing I like to do when working with characters without arms is to add stick arms and legs to make it look better. Like I said before you could of worked on the overal presentation of this flash.
-OVERALL-
An okay flash but needs touching up.
~Review Request Club~
Dash-02 responds:
Thanks, I understand that I need to practice on my graphics's but I had a limited amount of time. As for the sound I don't know how to fade it out It could have been better I understand but you have to give me credit it passed with a decent score and thanks a lot for your review It will help me on my next flash.
