Very Nice Style
You had a great style going on around here. The drawings were drawn and animated very well. Unfortunately, there wasn't any music. It would have been great if you would have added in music. But not any kind of music, but a music that is soothing or realaxing or a type a music you think that fits the animation nicely. It would have been great as well if you would have made it much more longer. With the same style, same graphics, but just a little bit more longer. Overall, on your next edition, try making it much more longer, add relaxing music or music you think fits the animation and the animation will be more awesome than it is. Good luck on your future submissions.
Summary Points: Good Graphics, Awesome Style, No music but next time try to add some, very short, try to improve on length next time as well.