difficult to review-score
My head says its not very good, but my heart says you put quite a bit into it.
+you have indeed told the whole story, more or less.
-the images are scrappy
-The sound really is pretty rough. The worst aspect is that the music is too loud in relation to the speaking. Seeing as its in Speakonia, which is not the easiest to hear I cna hardly make out the workdsYou explained why you used Speakonia, but I am afraid it hasn't come out at all well.
-The animation is very limited.
-there are no real backgrounds. It would help a lot to explain the story if we could see where people are and a bit of snow on things.
See what you can do to improve this.
Best wishes,
Ice