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Megzlock-Christmas06 Card

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This is my very first flash on Newgrounds so be gentle. This took about 3 days to complete since I wanted to get it done before Christmas Eve which I managed to due. It's short but it's from the heart.

Merry Christmas, Newgrounds and the Lock Legion!

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Pretty cool

Good Points:
I like the visuals, detailed and plain and simple, thats what I like about most flashes. Your style is great, I like how you used your own voice instead of a speakonia voice, I like some different. Also I like the change in greetings, good one you.

Bad Points:
Too short, plus there wasnt much to the background which I found disappointing. Also the voice, seemed, I dont know the word for it, blurred? Anyway you should improve on those key areas.

Overall:
Good flash, Merry christmas to Newgrounds and the Locks.

yes

oh, we will... we will indeed.
5'ed

-Zippo

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im do not know drawing istiyle are cool the sound are god tol but nothing great

I Love You

I can see that you experiment before you post things up on NG, this is why I love you. All newbies put up reatrded flashes for their first and I Believe they don't need to be on Ng. Well, back on the flash. I liked the art, but the voice wasn't so great, very choppy, only a minor disliking. The text could of been clearer the first time the girl pulled down the white tag. Other than that, great work. 4/5

MegzHeartcho responds:

Thank you for your honest review. I'm very happy you enjoyed my first flash and gave me advice I could use in improving my work. I hope you have a Happy Holidays. ^_^

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Votes
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Score
2.00 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 21, 2006
11:30 PM EST