Needs Voices.
Not bad at all, good work! You need some voice actors, but other than that, a fairly decent submission.
~Tovi~
Author Comments
In the latest flash comic issue of Color of Yellow, Yuna hates her sister for racism against demon-type species. Alyssa goes on her first mission. Again, their paths will cross, for better or for worse?
-I am aware that there are some missing voices, that is due to personal obligations on the VAs and my part, not even I can supply my own voice since I was pretty busy as well.
-The action scene was suppose to be cool, but I lost the batch of "cels", thus it never happened.
-The second installment and the final one in the MaidRouser: Color of Yellow series.
-A lot of things went wrong with this series in general, from delays to technical problems. If I want to create a sequel, which most likely will be, it might be in a different name.
couldnt quite follow the plot...
i got alittle lost in the middle...... but it was a nice intro.... you just need to get their mouths movin!!!!! if you need help let me know!!!!
Doesn't seem to go anywhere;
This sort of reminds me of most of my stuff in that it had a lot of talking and plot. And was hard to understand - I guess my stuff is too, then. Still, good job. I think I'll watch the first one and then mabye give you a better review.
Mixed feelings
I thought that this cartoon had a lot of potential. It had some interesting character interaction, some nice humorous bits, and it looked like a lot of thought and work went into it. I think it still has a ways to go, though. The text often came up so fast that I couldn't read it, and only select characters had voices. If you give some characters voices, you need to give a voice to every character. If you fix those problems, I think you'll have a rather decent flash cartoon. Good luck, and have a wonderful holiday ^_^.
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