it was ok but...
the voices were pretty bad, i could barely hear them. and you have this thing labeled as a game, but its a movie. fix that!
Author Comments
I am working on a second episode after this one. I remade the voices and cut off the introduction because it was too slow. The next one will be better in every ways.
Well, it was better than I thought it'd be.
The only problem I see is that it's desperately trying to be anime. There's nothing wrong with an anime style, but the whole anime formula feels a little tacked on. Especially the generic anime facial expressions, they feel like they could have been better utilized.
The art was quite good, and the animation was pretty smooth. There was something up with the sound. The title song ended before the title appeared, and the speech was really quiet for me.
I'm interested to see where this goes, but I still feel you're constricting yourself to a cookie-cutter anime format. Don't be afraid to mix it up a little.
boniched responds:
Can you please be more precise concerning the end of your review ?
If you have advice about the anime format, do not hesitate. I want to progress as much people who go to newgrounds want to see good work.
Thank you
very good movie
It was short, but very good too ! Awesome graphics, good style, and the animation wasn't bad at all. I sincerely hope your movie won't be blammed.
not too bad
wasnt too bad only reason i went on the blam was u submitted it as a game instead of a movie not sure if anyone else here is that picky but yeah resubmit as a movie and u got 3 from me
Trees
I know you wanted to make the trees more realistic but they look like
human blood veins but in whole it was ok.