not bad one
that was an alright animation. a little but random but it was cool to watch.
Author Comments
I hope you enjoy this, i think its a little strange, I was home on break from school, and i thought i should make a toon instead of playing socom 3 all day.
The background is meant to be white so if you wonder why that is. Im excited to be submitting this i love the submitting new work, i love hearing what you guys have to say. SO either hate it or love it, constructive reviews please!
NOTE: this was made with KOOLMOVES not flash mx, KOOLMOVES has great limitations on what you can and cant do, its an entierly different program. Yes the animation is a bit choppy!
This is my first cartoon i have made in over 1.5 years. GCL Productions is back, I still have not completed my Legend of the Arcade Wizard cartoon (my dream) but its coming along slowy.
MUSIC BY: The Magnetic Fields and Ween.
Could have been a lot better
The graphics weren't all that well done, and the mike hiss was really annoying.
I realize you're working with an inferior program, but that doesn't really make it any better.
As for the humor, it's an idea that's been done over and over, and wasn't really that funny.
Sorry to blast you on the first movie you've done in so long.
Don't let it discourage you, just try to put a bit more time and effort into your next submission.
gclpunk responds:
Fair enough, i was personally surprised with the score, ive had ideas go constantly through my head for over a year but never found the time or motivation to sit down and a do them, ive also been focused on the Legend of the Arcade wizard which is going to be perfect when ever it is completed. I should probably get a new mic and sound system. Overall man its been a rough 1.5 years, but i love cartoons and making them and seeing people reactions to them. I dont think ill ever stop making cartoons. Anyways sorry for rambling, Thanks for the great review man it appreciated
i disagree...
with l(ame)man it wasnt that bad and i know from experience that program is annoying it could have been done better but it still was a decent lash video i gave it 5/5
gclpunk responds:
Thanks man, someone who understands my pain. Once again Thanks for the awesome review and VOTE!
The sound brought u down
there was fuzzy noses during the flash and the graphics wernt gd
Lman 3000
gclpunk responds:
yea, if you were to read the flash info you would have saw it say, made with KOOLMOVES, its inferior product to flash, its frustraiting dealing with that program.
thanks for your concern and the review.
Good start.
I think Newgrounds has enough "random thought" flashes however. You have some talent with lip synching and recording voices without much interference. I also assume that both characters voice overs were done by you so props to you there. This one might survive. Though on your next day off of Socom 3. Either buy Combined Assault or think up a cartoon with a bit more plot. Props either way though.
gclpunk responds:
Yea Im workin on this cartoon which will be my masterpeice for now "Legend of the Arcade Wizard" it is called, its coming along slowly, And yea man i heard Combined assualt was good.
Thnkas for the review.
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3.30 / 5.00
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