Needs work, but a good start

Congratulations on starting flash. It is pretty clear that you put a bit of effort into this movie, and that is something to be respected. Still, you have a lot to improve on. I am sorry to say that your dialogue was not funny. The timing was definately off. It looks like you have a recognizable story, another sign of rare-seen effort in first submissions. Your graphics were actually okay, just not the movement. Smooth motion will come with practice (I suppose. I have probobly had flash for less time than you have). Something else that was really striking about your movie was the colors you chose. They were very refreshing and for some reason looked really good together. I don't know, I have never ever thought anything like that but I am now. Unintentional or not, they just looked very pretty.

Anyways, keep learning, I can see that you will become a good artist. P.S. Your voice is funny. ^_^

Mmmm

Id like to cook me that clown fish. Good graphics man, the animation was a little slow tho. Good for your first flash movie though! I'm sure your next works will be even better!

boring

no seriosly this is so boring

Nice way to hide a screamer...

Yeah, screw you.

That great build up, to a face of the "devil", and screaming. Great job.

Hope you get blammed.

first flash!

hey,that's nice,a good and sensefull first movie, there isn't so much things like this one in the portal, so good work!
my advice-> for the next stuffs you can put more detail on backgrounds, the water can have a shading effect.
voices are ok, but the grayfish's voice is unexpressive, was it a computer voice?
well, just that, i'm waiting the next chapter!