Nice Work!

I liked this. The characters all vary in their design and your art style just seems different to others. Some of the voices were a little poor in quality, so perhaps exporting them in higher quality next time would be a good idea.

The storyline was intriguing, it pulled me into the cartoon. Despite their length, the character introductions were very-well produced and I feel they had a 'cool' air about them. Good job!

In the sequel you should push along the storyline in order to keep up interest, and improving the sound-quality wouldn't be a bad idea either. Overall, it was a good watch. Nice work!

I think it was great episode..

I think it was a great episode keep doing them i liked it alot.. Keep up the good work!

I realy like it

I hope this will get a good story development...
Its simple and nice... something that is not very much seen these days.. :)
Make more episodes... and ill help you keep them on NG ;)

-Jack

good!

I think you have done a great job...
I´m looking forward to see the next episode.

keep it up!

Not bad i would like to see the next one

A very good idea for a story, and i recommend it to everyone
Please keep up the good work