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Shyguy Mis-adventures 1

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Using a free trial version of flash, I whipped up this little short about a shyguy. First flash movie and, after I get my complete Flash program, more in due time.

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that was awsome

that was awsome, the movie was awsome, you're awsome... EVERYTHING ABOUT THE MOVIE WAS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ha Ha!

That was better than i thought! Awesome job on this, the part with Bowser singing was funny as anything!

Hilarious

Bowser- You expect me to waste my time tracking down some random shyguy??

Shyguy general- He called you a fat Bastard.

Bowser- WHAT?!?!?!
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LMAO.

For your first flash, very nice! It was pretty good in every area, exept i didn't really get the beginning. Looking forward to the sequel!

I like it.

For a first flash, I have to say I am very amazed. This was very well-done, and considering you did it under free trial just makes it all the better!

I gave the graphics an 6, you did a great job with the scenes and although the characters were sprites, you still did good. The only real reason the mark is low is because of the lip-syncing.
Style got a definite 8, really cool, I must say. The storyline is pretty funny.
Sound is a 4 because, quite frankly, I didn't have my speakers plugged in so I don't know if you had any or not!
Violence is a 6, it was there, just not in an overall plot.
Interactivity 2, there was a play button after all.
Humor 10, all out funny. Poor Bowser is horny!!

Keep it up, if you get flash again you must make the sequel!

~Leonard

mimic12455 responds:

Don't worry, I'm-a making a sequel on my free time thanks to the full version of Flash I got a few weeks ago.

Anywho, thanks for the feedback. I'm still working on the lipsynching, hopefully it'll be better the next time. Be sure to find the sequel coming out this summer. :)

mmmm

ok some things that need to be changed:
1- check and recheck ur movie allot
2- more intonation in the voices overact maybe
3- make sure ur images are jpg'ed

Question
-Why was that lens thing in the first part? was it supposed to be like that?

-The bowser part was boring, spice it a bit more up.

well if u might wanna work on these errors it might make ur flash movie more worth while.

~Tiki-Turtle

mimic12455 responds:

Thanks for the feedback.

To answer the question: THe lens part was used because the spyguy was recording at that moment.

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Dec 14, 2006
12:53 AM EST