Here is a short one minnute flash movie I made for school.
not bad
Over all this piece wasn't bad. You had an intresting use of silhouette, movment, shapes and timming. The one thing that put me off a bit was the choice of silhouettes you used for the piano player and the what I think was supposed to be a saxaphone player. Because these 2 created questions for me I found I was cut off from the piece.
Great Style!
This was great! First of all, everything fitted in nicely with the style of the music. The graphics you used suited the animation very well. Very nice job on that. The music was very good, also. The only flaw I found was that it got a bit repetitive. And the objects or instruments moved a bit slowly. But nonetheless, this was a great animation and a relief from seeing such random and violent stuff the portal brings everyday. Good luck on your future submissions.
Hey, I liked it!
I liked the project. It was...sophisticated. And you took music from Freeplay, which has the best music around! Good job!
Why thank you!
Probably won't pass
School projects never pass, no matter how good they are. And people on newgrounds will blam anything that isn't EXTREMELY violent or EXTREMELY well done or moderately funny. That's just how newgrounds is... 2/5
I agree I just wanted to put somthing out there. I hope to make somthing more violent up once I'm better at flash. Thank you for taking the time to review, I appreciated it.
you did a good job.
i'm a big fan of jazz and think you did a great job with this i hope you get an A+
Wow, I went to a six hour jazz concert and preformed in a nine hour Jazz festival. That's what inspired me.
Thanks for the A+