Good things: Nice point, and good idea to try and invent "Two Perspectives". I bet you inspired RWappin. Bad things: Just because it's intentionally bad does not make it better. Try to be more realistic in weight and stuff like that. How could Tom throw a chair all the way across the room with his bare hands? Come on, don't make him Hulk Hogan. And pretty bad topic. There was a person who submitted something that had the SAME point as this right before you, and he didn't turn out that good either. Overall: Pretty good, but pretty bad too. It does look well for its time, at least.