Needs work.

Am I a Clone Trooper Or Storm Trooper? There are no yellow armor or gray helmeted w/ blue armor peole in Sw. Ur blaster rifle doesn't look like a blaster rifle. The blaster rifle fire don't look like blaster rife fire at all. What is the thing u throw at Taiel? Is it ur blaster rifle?The character seems to be a Jedi , a mercenary or bounty hunter, not a soldier.

Not bad

Its not bad, bit i think you should make it a little easy or maybe put something like a check point 'cause is a hard to complete.