the next episode ^_^
o I'm exited to see the next episode caus the story is so good nice job =D
Author Comments
Yup, it's done, finally.. Took me a long time because I've been lazy lately so, enjoy!
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Thanks to iLegend for icon!
killergold2 responds:
Thanks ^^
good
allright story, a bit too texty, not alot of killing, kinnda short, could be better
*Needs Improvement*
- Writing(StoryBoard)
- More Violence(All he does is shoot a person while rappling)
- More story more depth ( Finally we know his god dam name :)]
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