Well, i really spent this flash for about a year. I left it for so long and today i decided to finish it once and for all. This is a n00bie work. I actually do far better. Sorry, this is due to my last year's 1337-ness. Yup, first flash. Enjoy...
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^^Good Points^^
This took a while, but it got funny once Orion got into the office. The pizza lamp falling was pretty funny, and that whole conversation was humorous. I liked the voice overs you did too.
^^Needs Improving^^
You do very little animation in this, and when you do they are pretty crude. Work on that part of this. Also, the voice overs in the beginning seem to be very loud to me. You could really decrease the volume, as they almost got me to stop watching this mid-stream.
Thanx 4 ur organized review, milinko959. I expected the flash to be quite boring except for the last part, if u have watched LotR and noticed the 2nd ending. Yup, u can count on me to make a far better flash in future, m8!
okay
the drawings were alright in this one, but i think that more could've been done to this one. better quality audio and voices, a little less of a 'n00b' theme to t and a bit more of a plot to it. your efforts were alright though.
Alrite KWAS71KCK! Thanx 4 ur advice. Like i said, this was a t0t4l1Y r4nd0m flash and a n00bish flash. So, i swear to give you guys a quality and scripted flash in future.
not bad for a N00B!
i liked the dialogue nd stuff but it was a bit hard sometimes was hard to understand- thanks for the subs. The lip- synching wasn't bad for a N00B either. overall- goodie!
Thanx m8! I really am a n00b yeah. My old microphone really sucked hard. Thanks to my new headset, i can record quality sound, remember the last sentence? And i'll get a proper script cuz this has no plot. T0t41 RANDOMNESS ROFLMFAOL! And i promise, the next flash will improve much more graphics-wise since i'm no n00b no more...not really...
lol!!
Hey dude!,u have a good talent,yeah....of course that the graphics could be better with some work,but its thousants better than lot of what i have seen here on the portal,the voices was also really bad...I know it can be difficult,but try to seach for a good sound editor....and that´s it,keep training,u will be great!
PS: The ending was a comedy!!!
Good Luck,
Henrique T.M.
Thank Flasher! My graphix was n00bish cuz its last years...i got new style now...i juz bought a new microphone, notice that the ending where that guy sitting, he talks much clearer? Haha... I promise to give quality in the next flash. The ending...i copied from a new movie...Guess it yourself...I won't say...