(( NOTBAD ))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was notbad, i rather enjoyed this, the "ANIMATION" was notbad, kinda neat actually, but something i think this could have that would make it better would be some color even if it was just abit, anyways nice animation, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent animation nice smooth animating.

~X~

hmmmmmmmmm

graphics certainly dont make the flash. 8 is WAY to low for a flash animation. i see good things coming from you. i expect more. and you can get flash at your house. for free.PM me for details.

not bad one

it was an alright animation. very nice drawings/sketches and a cool ending, but i think that this one really could've used audio of some sort and colour... colour more then audio i think. i mean, the drawings were very nice in this one, but some colour to them really would've made it nicer.
oh well, nice efforts though and it was cool to watch.

cool i guess

meh it was ok. um i guess somethings you could do is um well i guess colour would be a big one but if you dislike colouring or just dont feel to put the time in, black and white kind of things are still cool. and i guess another would be maybe to increase the frame rate or something cause it's all uh choppy and stuff or whatever you could call it. anyway cool stuff keep going and im sure you'll be pro in no time

kinky.

not a bad flash, per-se. good animation style etc. but i just cant rate this high without any audio. especially when it's this short. please either lengthen it, or add sound, or both.