this is great, but.....

it's too short. next time, make it longer. good sprites, though.

The shortness and awesomeness are the only flaws.

random.....just like you said in the title

Nice Effort ^^

Considering your age, and your first submissions, you are actually pretty good, and if you carry on with this progressive work up, you could definatly create something most epic. For alot of others, some lack fluidity, but you have that, though although choppy in places. ^^; the first part had much more to it, and the music fit well, maybe you should of continued with the music in this one, kinda give it that battle feel. I'm giving you a 10 and a 5 because I feel you can make some major progress, and do great things, overall not a bad Sprite movie. To be really honest, better than anything I could do lol. -I'm just so lazy XD- Continue to do great work. ^^

Somewhat disappointed

I'm not sure how to compress filesize but there should be no way that this short sprite fight with no music is nearly 10MB so that is a mandatory fix and you should get some advice on how to do so cause this fight should have been longer and had some music to go with it,the fight itself though it was short had it's moments but overall it's still a beginning and just get experience in flash,good luck to you in the future.

i like ur animation 2nd best to alvin earthworn

ur tight ur animation is kewl so IF PPL dont like it then they should make there own dame animtions and get critizcied but ur second in the race of mario bro z so keep up the good work krispy zero i WOULD RATE U AND ALVIN 200000000/2000000 if it was up to me for animation cuz i wish i cud do animation bbut my mom wont let me downald the tools for it so KEEP UP THE GOOD DAME WORK CRISPYZERO. bye the way its greater then chartaer battle ass the dude spells it so dame annoying they have no action no nothing. just a minute there jumping then their dead u and alvin-earthworm should ask the person who created if he needs help. oh yea imm getting a Nintendo ds.

An improvement from the last one.

Dude, this really shouldn't have been so big for a movie so short! Anyway, it really was an improvement from the first installment, and I think your movies really do have potential.