well this is my first movie i'm proud to post on newgrounds and I hope it will be my first one to stay on newgrounds, my girlfriend loves penguins and I wanted to make this for her because I know she'll laugh at it, hope you enjoy :D P.S. No penguins we're harmed during the making of this movie.
not bad one
that was an alright animation.... he survives the fall, landing on the planes windshield and going through the jets engine... yet he gets killed when the plane falls on him... predictable really, but i felt sorry for the poor penguin, especially since he'd survived the rest.
Funny
he only black point in this movie is the graphics.
still kinda funny.
keep on the good work
needs better sound
the graphics were quite good. the windshield wiper animation needs some work though, it was not realistic at all.
but the biggest problem was the sound. the sound clips were at diffrent volumes and too short and abrupt.
it's a good 1st submition but the next flash you do spend a few days on sound rather than a few hours. sound makes or breaks a submition.
Wait...
Your going to impress your girlfriend by killing her favorite animal?
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that was good for your first animation on newgrounds here are some hints
1. make the sound quality better
2. the drawing was good but your animation has room for improvment
3. the animation was kinda choppy so try to change the fps
4. next time show the penguin beiing squashed and add a lot of blood. lol
hope to see you get better