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Toki Doll

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Just your average Dress up game.

It is a nice drawing of the girl and the clothes but it lacks originality. Its been done over and over again simply because they are the easiest games to create. Make something original about it. Make it your own. Make the objects clip on to the body not to just go over them. I may bring out a tutorial on how to do that if it will get rid of every making repetative games.

5/10

-Sterockicy-

HappyAlarm responds:

I would really really love a tutorial on this! I'm sorry that you didn't fine this satisfying and appriciate the critique. I am not the most flash savvy person in the world. obviously o-o The reason this is so lame is because it's technically incomplete. I explained this in my commentary, but for some reason it never showed up >_< I did this months ago, and am planning on doing a much better one.

4.5

I am not the biggest dress-up fan in the world - as they tend to lack animation and originality in my opinion. With this one, the look of the doll was very similiar to others, as were the clothes. Some animation would have been nice, perhaps some arm movements or the blinking of the eyes. A voice would also of been nice. There is nothing really new in this, but at least the music loop was alright. I would have also liked to of seen more of an option in clothes and accessories like shoes, socks, etc.

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K

^^Good Points^^
The original reason that I decided to protect this was because of Ageha, one of the greatest BEMANI derived games every to be made :) The game itself is well made of course, which contributed to the five. Everything was drawn and shaded well and also everything fit and was layered perfectly.

^^Needs Improving^^
Definitely needs some more clothing, and definitely some accessories, since the best part about a dress up game is making things look funny. You may want to think about some different background choices as well.

Good but

Dressing games are always fun but I think you could've put some more clothes and accessories.

Decent, but….

Not to much to this flash. It IS a nice diversion but the music was only cool for about 8 seconds. Then it became repetitive and annoying. This could be fixed with a catchier song, a selection of music to chose from, or even a mute option.

And the visuals made the flash seem….boring. Not so much the girl or the selection of clothes, but the plain white background. Maybe by putting in various backgrounds matching the clothes (i.e. swimsuits for the beach, ‘club’ clothes for a club setting, athletic wear for the gym, etc.) with Easter eggs in background items?

All in all, this was a nice flash outside what’s mentioned above. Maybe we’ll see these in future flash.

HappyAlarm responds:

Yeah, I know ^ ^;; I actually mentioned the resason for that when I wrote my comentary, but for some reason it didn't show up when I submitted this o_o Basically this was never completed. I will be making a new one with better graphics and cool stuff soon though, so please keep a look out for it ^-^

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Uploaded
Nov 20, 2006
2:35 PM EST