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Tomahawk V NightHawk

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Sorry about the quite large file size, it is because of the theme song. I don't know how to do preloaders but will update when I learn how. This is about Tomahawk, a secret agent, and his struggles against Nighthawk. This is not an Xiao Xiao ripoff. This is my own storyline.

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masterpiece

Ba.

At least you had a plot.

Still the drawings were just nasty, and the music didn't fit the movie.

Hint: Maybe you might try a background next time.

Pretty dull.

It's an okay effort, but the final product isn't very interesting or entertaining.

Not a Xiao Xiao rip off? You're quite right...

Because Xiao Xiao is much better then this shit that your tried to call your own... let me give you some advice on how to make this better
Keep the song, it kicks ass. Though you might want to lower it's quality to reduce file size... or use a different file type. It's simply too big.
If you're gonna use Stick Animation, do it good. This sucked ass. Take some time to go through each of these scenes and make everything nice and smooooooth. Like a baby's bottom.
Also, fix up your "Story line" because this one felt like it came from a pot head after a drug-induced nightmare. Or even better, make it so it tries to be funny instead of serious, you could away with that...
One final thing, don't use Microsoft Paint to do your "Art." Use something like Paintshop Pro, it has served my needs quite well when I try to draw...
Oh well, just keep trying, you'll get it if your persevere.

so bad it was funny.

Yeah, nice walk animation there, looked like a decrepit old monkey skeleton trying to cross the street. Yes you are correct, this is not a xaio xaio rip off, no xaio xaio ever looked that bad.

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Uploaded
Oct 15, 2001
3:49 PM EDT
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