I agree with the others
Great idea and a great plot... but as said before the dialogue really needs some work. It has great potential to be a great flash series as well as a game, all that needs to be done is hae the dialogue worked on.
Author Comments
Hey everyone...i know my last movie really sucked a fat one to a lot of you, others liked it. everyone all said it lacked plot though. So here, is THE PLOT. ANYONE NEEDING THE PLOT SUMMARY, READ HERE:
This guy becomes a Dark Saint (explained in the movie) after he assassinates his companion who was captured and questioned. he does this to protect himself, and his criminal organization (which is not named at this time) The guy he assassinates had goons with him, and they take out the Dark Saint character, or so they thought...
I hope everyone enjoys this one, again a lot of feedback is appriciated, tell me anything. i haven't been doing this for very long, so my movies aren't the best, but i hope you can be somewhat entertained.
PEACE OUT - ENJOY
I agree with sipho below
Great style in the peace, interesting plot idea as well, but really need to work on that dialogue, just doesn't quite sit right. Has the potential to be a great series if you expand on it though.
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there's a way to write your dialogue and make it funny, sarcastic, and serious all at the same time...It seemed you were going for that sort of humour but also a serious film...but you didnt quite hit it with the dialogue...Everything else was perfect however...
NICE, Ve` ve` nice.
Love the idea and i hope to see more of this story come into the light...
Splendid, most splendid
Graphics: Oh, so pretty. So very, very pretty. You sir, have excellent drawing skills.
Style: Yup, plenty of it. A smooth techno thriller pacing with assassins, organizations, and Dark Saints.
Sound: plenty of effects with some very nice musical selections
I'm definatly looking forward to part 2.
WHY THE HELL IS THIS A 3.28!?