the hell

that was the most pointles peice of shit ive ever seen!!! and i curse this and all who enjoy it to an early and well deserved grave!!!!

Hehehe :P

I disagree with what the last person has written :P I think, all that needs doing, is to lengthen it.
*Shrugg* But, you do say its short, so, *shrugg* I guess it's an acception.
Too simple probably.. :P
Good drawing though - no fuzziness etc, same for the sound, so fuzziness. Just lengthen it more for episode, :) Look forward to it
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Keep it up!

Totally bombed the title

The only thing that had potential here was the title. All sorts of possibilities spring up right after reading the title.

Everything else requres a lot more work, mostly plot and drawing. I doubt you put a lot of effort into this though.

Kind of funny how corny that was

i hsall ask a question though, how the hell can you blow a dart through a dome helmet? the animation was okay, but it certainly was missing plot,but so is half the portal! all in all, it was okay for how short it was

hehe funny

that green thing was scary, and for the blond well she was abit ugly hehe, ohwell it was funny though...